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I've had this account for 10 years, I figured it was finally time to move accounts.
My new account is HeyItsFia. Go watch me there.
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im doing this thing from a much older journal, but with a different character

Character in review: Lucou

[ ] They are possessed by an angel
[ ] They are possessed by a demon
[ ] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie
[X] They are physically strong
[ ] They have a rare hair/fur color
[ ] Their eyes are an unusual color
[ ] This happens to be red
[ ] Their eyes change color
[X] They have wings (do Fire Wings count?)
[ ] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift
[ ] They are immortal
[ ] (if a female) they have large bra size
[X] (if a male) they are very muscular
[X] They are very attractive to the opposite gender
[X] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc 
[ ] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[ ] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet
[ ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers (I'm not countin' this shit since in my story, about 79% of the world's populous was bestowed with some sort of power/mutation.)
[ ] They are a healer
[ ] They are from a very rich/royal family
[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[ ] They have lost one/both of their parents
[ ] They ran away from home
[ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc. 
[ ] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death
[X] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature (does it count if she's 100% demon?)
[ ] They never knew their parents
[ ] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[X] They are very attractive to the same gender
[ ] They have lots of friends/no friends
[ ] They are emo/cutesy
[X] They look much younger/older than they really are. (Looks Pretty Young, Is Actually Almost 2,000 Years Old!!)
[ ] They are currently in a relationship 
[ ] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
[ ] They have a mental disorder
[ ] They have an emotional disorder
[ ] They struggle to stay sane
[ ] They are a psycho
[ ] They have multiple personalities
[X] They are very intelligent
[ ] They have hallucinations
[ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[ ] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[ ] They have a guardian spirit
[ ] They have a 'special type' of soul
[ ] Their soul is not the same as them
[ ] They can talk to spirits/ghosts
[ ] Some part of their body glows
[ ] They have a rare/unusual name (well it's not unusual in terms of DEMON names...)
[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstice etc.
[ ] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth
[ ] They are connected with a certain element 
[ ] They are connected with a certain animal
[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'
[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[ ] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[ ] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[ ] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[ ] They are hiding from someone/something
[ ] They have a rare blood type
[ ] They cry blood sometimes
[ ] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
[ ] They are from a different country to where they live
[ ] They are very mysterious/dark
[ ] They are very lively/happy
[ ] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[ ] They are very patient
[ ] They are from a long line of (insert profession/power here)
[ ] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear
[ ] They have amnesia
[ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[ ] The have a curse upon them
[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[ ] They are 'the chosen one'
[ ] They have insomnia

Overall points: 9

Point Reductions

Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:

[ ] They smoke
[ ] They are an alcoholic
[ ] They are overweight
[ ] They are addicted to drugs
[ ] They have a short temper 
[ ] They enjoy bullying others
[ ] They do not care much about others
[ ] They are emotionless in some forms

Final: 0



Final Score is: 9

<5 -Anti-Sue
Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they are scoring that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit ^^

6-15 -Balanced Character
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though. 

16-25 -Borderline Mary-Sue/Gary Stu
We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.

26> -Mary-Sue
Rewrite your character. NOW!
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about otr

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so... recently due to work i have had Very Little time to actually work on my games.
but that's not going to stop me.
i'm going to try to get a ton of work done on OTR over the summer.
i hope to release a demo before the end of the year.
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i Hate llama badges so much they do absolutely nothing they're the most useless thing on this site please stop giving me llama badges
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Mostly because I've been stuck on my phone for the past 2 months, which is also why I really haven't uploaded much. It's difficult uploading art from my phone since the app won't let me select anything and my browser it's a little slow.

Anyways I'm probably going to be pretty inactive for a bit more. I won't have internet on my computer until I get a job (which tbh is bad because a: I need internet to FIND a job and b: I feel I'm not fit fit any job due to my ADHD) so.

Also I kinda want to spend a lot less time away from this site since their thoughts on art theft are pretty much "if it's not a physical object, it's not theft"

Idk. I just haven't really been feeling this site much but it's pretty much all I have to post art on besides Tumblr.
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